Black Ghost

really cool beggining and i think the creatures were really cool. I think you should give us more backround on where the girl was from and why she wants to ...

thanx that is really awesome advice. I will be sure to apply it to any other poems i write

Hi everyone Ive done my best to make my story easier on the eyes because the pre button didn't seem to be working now u can read it without straining ...

I appreciater your editing, it really helps

I did what you said but it doesn't seem to be working right I tried to the first time and i keep trying but it won't keep the spaces

I really enjoyed this chapter of your story. Though I think you could have described all the dragons at the begginnig and their names, unless they weren't that important. Great ...

I liked it, it was pretty funny. Also I liked the long name at the beggining. GOOD JOB!